Homework:

Is education important? Why or why not?
It is really important. Because it can help you get a better job. But going to a good university is not only your goal. It's okay if you're = you've not graduated = graduated from a good university. You can live a happy life without graduating from a good university. But if you graduate = graduate from a good university, it can help = make your life much easier.

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