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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   cieps22    µî·ÏÀÏ   2025-02-12
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  On the first day of the trip, I went to the In cheon airport with my family for go to the Vietnam. I was so tired but very excited. After six hours, we arrived at the Vietnam airport. The weather was so hot that i lost my energy. On that day, I didn¡¯t play anything but it was exciting day. On the second day, I was very tired. Because I didn¡¯t sleep enough However, breakfast was so delicious that I couldn¡¯t give up! After eating the breakfast, I went to the safari. I love animal so I like safari❤ I watched tigers🐯, black swans🦢, bears🐻, giraffes🦒 I saw so much animals. It was a beautiful day. On the third day, my family and I went to the amusement park, aquarium, and water park. It¡¯s all in one in a place. So we can play various activities🎡🎢🎠. But my right foot hurt because of too much walk😭 today is the last day of this hotel. Tomorrow, my family and I will go to the resort. I hope tomorrow will come so fast !
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CORRECTED SENTENCES:

On the first day of the trip, I went to Incheon Airport with my family to go to Vietnam. I was very tired but also excited. After six hours, we arrived at the airport in Vietnam. The weather was so hot that I lost all my energy. I didn’t do much that day, but it was still an exciting day.

On the second day, I was really tired because I didn’t get enough sleep. However, breakfast was so delicious that I couldn’t pass it up! After breakfast, we went to the safari. I love animals, so I really enjoyed it. I saw tigers🐯, black swans🦢, bears🐻, giraffes🦒, and many other animals. It was such a beautiful day.

On the third day, my family and I went to an amusement park, an aquarium, and a water park—all in one place! So we had much fun doing various activities🎡🎢🎠. But my right foot started to hurt because I walked too much😭. Today is our last day at this hotel. Tomorrow, we will go to a resort.

I hope tomorrow comes quickly!

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