HOMEWORK:
Complete the paragraph below with your own information.
Hello! My name is Diana. I am eleven years old. I live in Seoul Korea. = I live in Seoul, Korea. My favorite color is purple and black. = My favorite colors are purple and black. I have a small family. My mother’s name is Sun Young Park. She is fifty one years old. = She is fifty-one years old. My father’s name is Jin Ho Ha. He is forty six years old. = He is forty-six years old. I have No (brother/sister). = I have no brothers and sisters.
Example:
Hello! My name is Alice. I am 24 years old. I live in the Philippines. My favorite color is purple. I have a small family. My mother’s name is Marjie. She is 40 years old. My father’s name is Dany. He is 42 years old. I have no brothers and sisters.
Teacher's Comment:
Great job, Diana! 😊 Your sentences are well-structured, and you provided detailed information. Just remember to add a comma between "Seoul" and "Korea" and use hyphens in ages like "fifty-one" and "forty-six." Also, use "no brothers and sisters" for clearer sentence. Keep up the good work, dearest Diana! |