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  My favorite food is the Kimchistew. This food is a stew made by boiling Kimchi and various vegetabeles together. It has a spicy and refreshing flavor. 10 years ago, I came From school to home my mother often made Kimchistew. This is my favorite dish because it is filled with my mother's love
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My favorite food is the Kimchistew. = My favorite food is Kimchistew
This food is a stew made by boiling Kimchi and various vegetabeles together.
It has a spicy and refreshing flavor.
10 years ago, I came From school to home my mother often made Kimchistew. = Ten years ago, when I came home from school, my mother would often make kimchi stew.
This is my favorite dish because it is filled with my mother's love. 

Comment:
Your writing is heartfelt and personal, which makes it touching. Just watch small grammar points like capitalization and article use. Great job sharing your connection to the dish! 

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