The = My greatest mountain climbing adventure is climbing Hanlla Mountain in winter = which is located in Jeju Island in winter last year. In order to get to the top of the Hanlla Mountain, there are = were some rules to follow. First, one is passing = we have to pass the middle line = part of the mountain until 12:00 noon because people climb after 12 pm on the middle line, it gets dart when people go down. It = it is dangerous for everyone to climb it after 12 p.m. since it will be already dark when they climb down. Second, one is taking = we have to take climbing iron in winter. Climbing the mountain is very dangerous without crampons due to snow. We can slide and fall down on the snow or ice. Also, we can’t expect height = the volume of snow."

In my case, I arrived at Jeju island around 8 am and got to Hanlla Mountain at 8: 55 due to my flight delay of airplane. Unfortunately, my friend forgot to take crampons; so she bought some expensive and low quality crampons in the nearest the shop. After finishing ready to climb = our preparation, we had to run to go to the top of the mountain. We arrived at the middle line = part of the mountain called Mindlle-nuengseon at 11:50. We could barely pass the middle line of the mountain = it. It is not easy to watch the clear and fantastic view of = at the top. Only some people can watch top of the mountain = do so in a short time because of the very strong snowstorm on the top. is very strong so = It makes the view of top is almost not clear. Fortunately, we could watched it and took many pictures.

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