제 목   Importance of animal in the ecosystem    상 태  
   작성자   byj9493    등록일   2015-10-07
   원 문
  Our ecosystem is Pyramid pattern. Phramid pattern is consist of many species. For example, there are 3-level of pyramid. superior level,mid level, low level. Superior level is the highest level, so the number of animal is small and most of the superior level are predators. but in the low level, the number of animal is big and most of them are microorganism. so If we destroy the nature, animal in the low level will disappear. and if the animal in the low level are disappear, the animals in the superior level can not eat anymore. so they will appear in the human's settlement. so they destroy crops. and also, animal help to move seed to other plants. It makes occur other individuals. In short, If we don't preserve proper number of animal, we will damaged from them. and also, animal make ecosystem rich by moving seed that makes another lives.
   내 용
 

Our ecosystem is Pyramid pattern. Phramid pattern is consist of many species. For example, there are 3-level of pyramid. superior level,mid level, low level.=  For example, there are 3 levels of pyramid : superior level,mid level, low level.  Superior level is the highest level, so the number of animal is small and most of the superior level are predators. = Superior level is the highest level, so the number of animal is small and most of the animals in the superior level are predators. but in the low level, the number of animal is big and most of them are microorganism. = While, the number of animals is big and most of them are microorganism in the low level. If we destroy the nature, animal in the low level will disappear. and if the animal in the low level are disappear, the animals in the superior level can not eat anymore.= If the animals in the low level disappear, the animals in the superior level can not eat anymore. so they will appear in the human's settlement. so they destroy crops. and also, animal help to move seed to other plants. It makes occur other individuals. = It makes other individuals. In short, If we don't preserve proper number of animal, we will damaged from them. = In short, if we don't preserve proper number of animals, the ecosystem will be damaged  and loose balance. and also, animal make ecosystem rich by moving seed that makes another lives.=  Animals make ecosystem rich by moving seed that makes another lives.

---NOTE---

1.) For example, there are 3-level of pyramid. superior level,mid level, low level.=  For example, there are 3 levels of pyramid : superior level,mid level, low level.

2.) Superior level is the highest level, so the number of animal is small and most of the superior level are predators. = Superior level is the highest level, so the number of animal is small and most of the animals in the superior level are predators.

3.) but in the low level, the number of animal is big and most of them are microorganism. = While, the number of animals is big and most of them are microorganisms in the low level.

4.) and if the animal in the low level are disappear, the animals in the superior level can not eat anymore.= If the animals in the low level disappear, the animals in the superior level can not eat anymore.

5.) It makes occur other individuals. = It makes other individuals. 

6.) In short, If we don't preserve proper number of animal, we will damaged from them. = In short, if we don't preserve proper number of animals, the ecosystem will be damaged  and loose balance.

7.) and also, animal make ecosystem rich by moving seed that makes another lives.=  Animals make ecosystem rich by moving seed that makes another lives.

 

Be careful with your punctuation marks. Make sure that the first letter of the first word of the sentence is also capitalized.

   이전글 HW
   다음글 If you are a mother or father, would you allow your son or daughter to listen heavy metal music?