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  I started my business 6 months ago and fortunatly, It is getting better and better. But i don't think it's stable status. So, to make stable enough income is my first priority these days. Running my business, something happens everyday. It's very challenging for me. Sometimes I work longer time than before even weekend. I feel tired but happy to accomplish my plans and resolve unexpected problems. I believe i'll be a succesful business woman in the future. As i must use English in my business place, I'll study English steadly. I need your help teacher. ;)
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I started my business 6 months ago and fortunatly, It is getting better and better.

But i don't think it's stable status.

So, to make stable enough income is my first priority these days.

Running my business, something happens everyday.

It's very challenging for me.

Sometimes I work longer time than before even weekend.

I feel tired but happy to accomplish my plans and resolve unexpected problems.

I believe i'll be a succesful business woman in the future.

As i must use English in my business place, I'll study English steadly.

I need your help teacher. ;)

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= I started my business six months ago and fortunately, it was getting better and better. But , I don't think it's stable. To make a steady income is my first priority these days. Running your own business, is something that doesn't happen everyday, that's why it is very challenging for me. Sometimes I work longer even during weekends.
I feel tired but happy to accomplish my plans and resolve those unexpected problems.I believe that I will be a succesful business woman in the future.
I need to learn English for my business and I need your help teacher. ;)

 

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