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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   nan8420    µî·ÏÀÏ   2015-10-15
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  the first, who is power to me god always give the power to me he is my power source he gives to me enough the power by he's word so I can do everything in he allowed work and the second who is power to me my mother give the power to me by she's behavior she shows to me that gave the kindness to pepole all the time I have learned she's honest from old times by she's behavior she lined up a bunch of meeting thing for I'm friends with good people she is the best person i've ever seen for my life
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the first, who is power to me = The first powerful one for me is..
god always give the power to me he is my power source = God always gives me power, He is the main source of my power.
he gives to me enough the power by he's word = He gives me enough power through His word.
so I can do everything in he allowed work = I can do all things through Him.

and the second who is power to me = The next powerful one for me is..
my mother give the power to me by she's behavior = My mother gives me power by taking care of me.

she shows to me that gave the kindness to pepole all the time = She has taught me to be kind to all the people.

I have learned she's honest from old times by she's behavior = She has taught me to be honest all the time.

she lined up a bunch of meeting thing for I'm friends with good people = She even chose my friends.

she is the best person i've ever seen for my life = She is the best person in the whole world.

 

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