Last Sunday I went hiking a mountain located within a one hour drive distance from home with my friends. Even though the peak of fall season passed, there were a lot of people on the mountain to enjoy the rest of the autumn. There were some steep parts and they were a little slippy that one of my friends slipped over on leaves fallen and grabbed my left hand. So I also almost tumbled. And one of my friends brought his 7 year old daughter. She needed help to keep a pace with us. After the hiking, we played billiard thinking of the past time we spent a lot of time playing it when we were university students in our 20’s. So I left home at 7:30 am and came home at 7 pm. It was a long journey to the past with old friend

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    I went hiking on a mountain with my friends last sunday. It is a one hour drive from my house. Even though the peakl season had passed by, there were still a lot of people on the mountain. They arrived there to enjoy the beauty of autumn. There were some parts of the mountain which was slippery and one of my friends accidentally tripped over the fallen leaves and he grabbed my left hand. We almost tumbled together. One of my friends brought his seven year old daughter. She needed to be assisted by his dad to keep up with us. We played billiards after hiking and we reminisced the past when we were university students in our twenty's.