제 목   What would the world be like without religion?    상 태  
   작성자   burgling    등록일   2015-12-28
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  We can hardly imagine world deprived of religions. In our state for instance, we are able to find churches all over and every Sunday mass they were filled with faithful followers. This goes in the same manner with Buddhism and Catholic. Furthermore, religions deeply effect on their followers’ values and views of the world. Lots of people are under grave influence and tend to feel guilty unconsciously when they infringed their spiritual codes. On the other hand, compared to the past, the impacts of religions are much declined. Now we are capable of criticize clergymen and even the pope who used to be regarded as sacrosanct. However, we are still reluctant to be offensive toward other religions since we know it can give rise to irritating results and be the casualties of hatred criminals. We can visualize world without religion. We don’t need to have guilty feelings, there would be no frictions between religions and people can spare time and money. Sorry to sound to be snob, but that’s true. However, we can’t say there are only negative features in religions. Our civilizations owe a lot to religions. Lots of values like honesty, industry, generosity and unconditional love toward others depend on religious belief. There are far more decent devotees compared to naughty followers. And they try to make better world by sacrificing them. We could assume that world without religions sometimes heartless and people feel perplexed. We need someone to lean on time to time.
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We can hardly imagine world deprived of religions. = We can hardly imagine a world deprived of religions.

In our state for instance, we are able to find churches all over and every Sunday mass they were filled with faithful followers. This goes in the same manner with Buddhism and Catholic.

Furthermore, religions deeply effect on their followers’ values and views of the world. = Furthermore, religions have profound effects on their followers’ values and views of the world.

Lots of people are under grave influence and tend to feel guilty unconsciously when they infringed their spiritual codes.

On the other hand, compared to the past, the impacts of religions are much declined. = On the other hand, compared to the past, the impacts of religions declined so much nowadays.

Now we are capable of criticize clergymen and even the pope who used to be regarded as sacrosanct. = Now, we are capable of criticizing clergymen and even the pope who used to be regarded as sacrosanct.

However, we are still reluctant to be offensive toward other religions since we know it can give rise to irritating results and be the casualties of hatred criminals.
We can visualize world without religion. We don’t need to have guilty feelings, there would be no frictions between religions and people can spare time and money.

Sorry to sound to be snob, but that’s true. = Sorry to sound snobbish, but that's true.

However, we can’t say there are only negative features in religions. Our civilizations owe a lot to religions.

Lots of values like honesty, industry, generosity and unconditional love toward others depend on religious belief. = Lots of values like honesty, industriousness, generosity and unconditional love toward each other depends on religious belief.

There are far more decent devotees compared to naughty followers. And they try to make better world by sacrificing them.

We could assume that world without religions sometimes heartless and people feel perplexed. = We could assume that a world without religion can sometimes be heartless and people could feel perplexed.

We need someone to lean on time to time.

NOTE: Very well said. ^^
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