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  It seems to understand someone sincerely. Because we are different, we have to think each other deeply. The older I grow, I feel that the world is mysterious. God creates the world beautifully. However, do the human live as the will of the God? My answer is no.
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It seems to understand someone sincerely.

Because we are different, we have to think each other deeply.

The older I grow, I feel that the world is mysterious.

God creates the world beautifully.

However, do the human live as the will of the God? My answer is no.

 


It seems to understand someone sincerely.

Because we are different, we have to think each other profoundly.

The older I grow. I feel that the world is mysterious.

God creates the world beautifully.

However, do the human live as the will of the God? My answer is “NO”.

 

 

 

Simply yet understandable and it is in a well constructed sentences. It seems like verses from a poem because of the rhythm on each line.  I just simply change a one word which has the same meaning as well but still suitable on your sentences. Well done!!! ^__________^

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