제 목   What’s the difference between having male and female friends?    상 태  
   작성자   burgling    등록일   2016-02-01
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  It goes without saying that we feel much comfortable with the same sex friends. And there are bunch of personal differences apart from the gender. However, though I try hard not to be biased, I can’t deny there are major differences in relationship with men or women. First, most men doesn’t much care about details. We can allow minor blunders and time delays. It can be beneficial but can cause many mistakes and hurt delicate feeling. However, most women tend to be sophisticated. Sometimes that drives men crazy and prevents the prompt process, but helps to solve number of complicated problems and prevent many possible emotional dismantling events. Second, most men tend to put less meaning on daily meals and shelters. Most men can eat anything for their meal, and can sleep anywhere if he could keep away from raining or snowing, and never dream of cleaning their place. Women are likely to be vice versa. They put much meaning on meals and their houses and very strict with cleaning their places. In spite of my adversity, my writing is full of prejudice. I can name number of exceptions for my essay. Please don’t blame me. And give your opinions about this.
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It goes without saying that we feel much comfortable with the same sex friends. And there are bunch of personal differences apart from the gender.

However, though I try hard not to be biased, I can’t deny there are major differences in relationship with men or women. = However hard I try not to be biased, I can’t deny the major differences in relationship with men or women.

First, most men doesn’t much care about details. We can allow minor blunders and time delays.

It can be beneficial but can cause many mistakes and hurt delicate feeling. = It can be beneficial but can cause many mistakes and hurt delicate feelings.

However, most women tend to be sophisticated. Sometimes that drives men crazy and prevents the prompt process, but helps to solve number of complicated problems and prevent many possible emotional dismantling events.
Second, most men tend to put less meaning on daily meals and shelters. Most men can eat anything for their meal, and can sleep anywhere if he could keep away from raining or snowing, and never dream of cleaning their place. Women are likely to be vice versa. They put much meaning on meals and their houses and very strict with cleaning their places.
In spite of my adversity, my writing is full of prejudice. I can name number of exceptions for my essay. Please don’t blame me. And give your opinions about this.

NOTe: Frankly speaking, I can't deny these allegations. ^^
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