. Is beauty in design important in your culture?


In my culture, beauty in design is really important. First, people are usually fond of the products in beautiful design = with beautiful designs. For example, many female consumers are looking for clothes that look beautiful and gorgeous rather than its practical use. In addition to the clothes, many female students like to visit Cafeteria = cafeterias decorated with beautiful designs. Today's young people emphasizes = empasize more on the design of the restaurant or cafe = a restaurant or a cafe than on practical aspects like the tastes of the dishes and their prices. For these reasons, today's marketers should think about the consumer's preference = preferences carefully before selling products because many consumers are thinking about the asthetic = aesthetic/esthetic aspects like design or appearnce as well as thequality.


** When you correct my writings please give me feedback about the organization and give some brief explanations when you indicate some grammartical errors.

NOTE:

products with beautiful designs= with here means  'having' or 'having something'

You can also say "products that are designed beautifully'

cafeterias or a cafeteria

emphasizes = empasize : Your subject is PEOPLE, it's plural. Go back to subject-verb agreement

the restaurant or cafe = a restaurant or a cafe = [parallelism] a restaurant or a cafe

'a' because you're not talking about a specific restaurant.

preference = preferences  = consumers have more than one preference

quality= An essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone

qualitites are always distinct or specific. you have to use 'the'