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  1.How important is sleep to you? Sleep is one of the most important factors consisting of our life. Because having enough sleep can reduce stress caused by a day or work. Also, it can help us do a good job in any areas, enhance our memory web interconnecting our thoughts and ideas that seemingly doesn't seem to be related each other. 2.How are you if you do not have enough sleep? What if this case happens, I might not do something well. Because lack of sleep isn't good for our memory skills and health, and someone really wanna commit to memory something well, he or she had better get enough sleep. If they wanted to get a good grade. Simply, lack of sleep distracts our concentration skills. 3.What is your sleeping pattern like? Everyday at night around 11, I prepare for going to bed, and with lying down, I memorize (or read) some vocabulary until I fall asleep.
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CORRECTED HOMEWORK:

 

1.How important is sleep to you?
Sleep is one of the most important factors consisting of our life = in our lives because = Because having enough sleep can reduce stress caused by a =the day or work. Also, it can help us do a good job in any areas, enhance our memory web interconnecting our thoughts and ideas that seemingly doesn't seem to be related to each other.
2.How are you if you do not have enough sleep?
What if this case happens, = When this happen,  I might not do something well because = Because lack of sleep isn't good for our memory skills and health, and  if someone really wanna commit to memory something well = someone really wants his/her memory to work well, he or she had better get enough sleep If they wanted to get a good grade also. Simply, lack of sleep distracts our concentration skills.
3.What is your sleeping pattern like?
Everyday at night around 11, I prepare for = before going to bed, and with = while  lying down, I memorize (or read) some vocabulary  until I fall asleep.

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