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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gyu2seo    µî·ÏÀÏ   2016-03-21
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  I think SNS[social network service] is not having enough positive influences to people who uses them. Although it is made as to make people's human relationship more actively, many are too absorbed just using it as to show off and bluffing. And even there are some people depressed by thoes bluffing. If we cannot use it wisely, it will be better not to use it.
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I think SNS[social network service] is not having = does not have enough positive influences to people who uses them. Although it is made as to make people's human relationship more actively. Many people are too absorbed just = in using it as = just to show off and bluffing. And even there are some people depressed by thoes bluffing = Some people become deppressed because of cyber bullying. If we cannot use it wisely, it will be better not to use it.

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