Today I watched the = a movie called Zootopia. One rabbit said her dream was = is to be a police/policewoman. But she didn't look scary so they disagreed. After she entered the police school, the rabbit went to the place called Zootopia. She became a police and did police things, but she did strange things. After 1 hour/an hour and some minutes the rabbbit found that some flowers can make the animals abnormal. So the rabbit arrest = arrested the people who used the flowers into bullet and the fox who had an adventure with the rabbit became a police. If I were a police, I will arrest the criminal = criminals.

(NOTE: * the movie = a movie ; since it is the first time for you to mention the movie. EX: I watched a movie yesterday. The movie was interesting.

            * her dream was police = her dream is to be a police/policewoman ; you need to use the verb "is" because we are talking about her dream, and it should present tense. EX: My dream is to be a pilot.

           * Do not forget your articles. (a, an, the)

           * I will arrest the criminal. = I wil arrest the criminals.. ; we should use the world "criminals" because we are talking about many people here. EX: I like to be a doctor to treat patients. ^^)

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He didn't know the meamings of 'disagree, strange, abnormal, arrest, bullet', so I told him thoes.

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Hi, Gerrard's Mom. :) His homework is impressive. ^^ I hope that he'll continue on writing good sentences. And, I'll take note of the words that he doesn't know. :) I'll try to talk about it in our class. :) I hope that you'll have a nice day. ^^ Take care~

~Teacher Lady ^.^